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Thursday, 29 August 2019

Scary stoy

I am learning about words and titles its bin awesome to learn it. In a story you need a title and characters and sentences in the story needs to be good. and for me it has bin trike and hard.

Abandoned hospital


Once upon a time three teens Sarah and Mia and Zack they went on a school bus thip sarah has a puppy.
They went on the front of the bus.Sarah has a blue outfit Mia has a black 
Outfit Zack has a green outfit. Ween they got on the bus a mean man makes them go to the abandoned hospital that had to do it so thay 
Did. the mean man gave them a map that got in.The beds look

Like they never been sleep in. sarah’s pupp is backing and ween she looked awond nofing but dust two mins later sarah’s puppi s backing agen this time ween she look’s dack a zombie is ther thay strat to ran





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